Journal 20: IP 4 Post-workshop Reflection and Plan

After my peer workshop what I will do to submit my best updraft is better source the author and define who the person is and better state their quote or the information I am using. What was useful from the workshop was the opinions and feedback I got about my topic. They told me that I had an interesting topic and my first paragraph caught their attention. The suggestions my group had was to find different ways to use the words "body image" because I was using it to much that it got distracting. And to be more specific about where I was getting the information. Yes I will use the suggestions my peers gave me because it can change the flow to my essay and make it better.