Journal 11: IP 2 Post-workshop Reflection and Plan

In today's workshop my partner and I discussed about how in dept we need to describe the person we are interviewing. For myself in order to have a better updraft I need to be more descriptive, ask questions that give a story and have better use of language in my essay. What was helpful about the workshop was how she helped me come up with questions in which will keep the person I was interviewing thing about it. What I think I did well is probably the order I started my essay.