Journal 6: IP 1 Post-Workshop Reflection and Plan

After my peer workshop, what ’ll do in order to submit my best updraft is by being more descriptive and focusing on the “so what” concept. What was most useful about the workshop was the feedback I got and the marks they left on my paper. As well as ways they helped me make it better and perfect some of my sentences. What I think I did well was catch the reader’s attention. The suggestions my group had was to focus on the purpose, they said I had a good subject/storyline but I didn’t really have the then and now. I will use these suggestions because I feel like it will make my story better.